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Sunday, September 23, 2012

Intro 2

                    I walked into this place I'd never been.Crazy lights,loud music and not a soul I could understand through thier thick Maine accents.So I just ordered a beer and nodded a lot mainly because I had no idea what anyone was saying.As I looked around I thought this is where a wrong address will bring you!

1 comment:

  1. Works somewhat better than 1, but still has no clear sense that we are about to read three reasons for something that happened.

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