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Sunday, October 14, 2012

Cause Intro #2 Re-write

                        The time had come for me to fly.I felt the need to spread my wings and find a knew nest.At the time I left for this new land of Maine I felt so many solid reasons but as I stood waiting in the cold for a cab I  wondered if I ever really had good reasons at all.

1 comment:

  1. Laurie, a graf, an intro graf especially, has to open the door a little, invite us in. This is more or less the opposite--we need a bit of scene and backstory.

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