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Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Classification Essay Intro # 1

                          Many types of people walk into a hospital on any given day.There are those that you hear fromthe emergancy parking lot complaining about everything from the ride,to the wait to the pure fact that its raining outside.There are those that you know are in horrible agony but yet wouldn't complain even though thier life does depend on it.And then there's the worst kind in my opion.They smile,tell you everything is great, top notch care and then bam one week after discharge the've written a completly rotten letter directly to the CEO filled with nothing but complaints.

1 comment:

  1. Same categories, less detail than in #2--and I think that's okay. You might want to save the detailed description for the middle grafs. But there is no hook here either.

    The logical hook might be for you to describe yourself in this hospital setting.

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