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Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Outro for Classification Essay

                        Keep a few things in mind the next time you have the misfortune of being a patient in a hospital.We are in this profession because we care we really do want to help you.We are not judging why or how you came to be in our hospital.There are things we cannot fix.We did not push you down the stairs that broke your ankle,we did not break your wood chipper so it would be faulty and hurt you and did not give you high cholestrol.We will be kind,patient and understanding.We are not mind readers.So if there's an issue polietly speak up.If we can fix it we will.Some issues are simply out of our hands.We are medical proffesionals but we are also; human beings with feelings.Being rude and yelling at us will not  fix  why you have found yourself in the hospital to begin with.

1 comment:

  1. This sounds like it will work very nicely--but have you changed the 'you' from medical professionals in graf 1 to potential patients in graf 5? IMO the potential patient angle works better than the medical professional one.

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